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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Bradyisarecentlyretiredsearchandrescuedog.HeisnothappyandmisseshisownerAlbecauseAlhasgoneoutonarescuemissionwithouthim.AlsnephewStevedecidestotakeBradyalongwhenheandhisfriendZachgoonanovernighthike.ButsuddenlySteveandZachsmelledsomethingburningandtheyrealizedthatlightninghassetthewoodsonfire.Wind-blownflamehadleapedfromthetopofonetreetoanother.Thelongdrysummerhadturnedtheforestintoatinderbox(危机四伏的地区),andthethunderstormwasnthelpingmuch.Ithadmorewindandlightningthanrain.ZachpulledStevesarm.“Letsgo!Wecanmakeitbacktotheriverwecrossedtoday.”
Bradybarked_a_sharp_warning.Aheadofthemlayadensecurtainofsmokeacrossthetrail.Theydnevermakeitthroughthat—theydhavetofindanotherescape_route.Thedogwastugging(拖，拉)athisleash(皮带)tryingtodrawthemawayfromthesmoke.ThiswaswhatBradywastrainedtodo,andyetStevewasuneasy.Itseemedtohimtheyweremovingawayfromtheriver.
Bradyliftedhisheadandsnuffed(出声地嗅)thesmoke-ladenwind.Nextmoment,thedogboundedawayanddisappeared.Theboysyelledandshoutedforhim,buthedidnt 跟踪演练
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
JackandhiswifeTonyaweresailingaroundAfricawiththeirfriendsMaxandSasha.Onedaytheysawabigfishingboat.Itwasmovingfast.
“Hello！”theyshouted.Themenontheboatlookedatthemangrily.Maxlookedcarefullyattheboat.
“Somethingswrongwiththeirfishingnet，”hesaid.Theygotnearertothenet.
“Whatsthat？”saidTonya.“Thereissomethinginthenet.Itsalive.”
Veryslowlytheymovednearer.
“Icanseeitnow，”saidTonya.“Itsakiller_whale—itshurt.Theresbloodinthewater.Howcanwehelpit？”
“Icanseeittoo.Itsababybutwemustbecareful，”saidMax.
Jackjumpedintothewater,“Icangetthenetoffitsfin(鳍)，”hesaid.
Jackgotthenetoffthebabykillerwhale.Therewasabigcutonitsfin.Itswamaway.Suddenlytherewereotherkillerwhalesneartheboat.
“Jack！”Tonyashouted.“Getinquickly.”Jackswamtotheboatasfastasafish.“Thatbabykillerwhale...IamgoingtocallitLucky，”hesaid.
Astheymovedaway,itbegantorainharderandharder.
Jacksaid,“Wemustgetawayfromthewind.Icanseeatownoverthere.Letsgo.”
Thetowngotnearerbutthe_wavesgotbigger.Suddenlyaverybigwavehittheboat.
“IseveryoneOK？”shoutedJack.
“Tonya?...Shesnotintheboat，”saidSasha.“Shesin_the_water.”
Theylookedintothecold,darkwaterforhours.“Tonya!Saysomething,Tonya.Whereareyou？”shoutedMax.
The_windgotstrongerandtheboatwasfullofwater.Anotherbigwavehittheboat.
“Jack,doyouwantusalltodie？”saidMax.“Wecantdoanymore.Tonyaiswearingalife_jacket(救生衣)andshecanswimverywell.Letssailtothetown.”
Momentslatertheboathitabeach.Theywentout.MaxandSashasleptonthe_beach.Jacksatnearthewater,lookingattheseaandthinkingaboutTonya.
注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为词左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：
Atthattime,Tonyawasfivehundredmetresawayoutinthesea.Paragraph2：
Jackwaswalkingalongthebeachandsuddenlyhe...写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Jack和妻子Tonya在与朋友一起乘船环游非洲时冒险救下了一头虎鲸，这时突然下起雨来，风越来越大，他们的小船被海浪击中，Tonya掉进水中不见了。[精彩范文]
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Atthattime,Tonyawasfivehundredmetresawayoutinthesea.Abigwavecameandcrashedontoher,swallowingher.Shestruggledto